Why the Scissor-Tailed Flycatcher has a Split Tail, Week 9 Story
A long time ago, when humans still had not come about, Oklahoma
was filled with many of the animals that are still found there today. Two of
the most important animals within the community were the graceful, brown and white
feathered Kingbird and his friend, the massive Buffalo. One day, as the Kingbird was resting on the Buffalo back, looking for insects to catch, the Buffalo
turned its head sideways and spoke, “Little bird, why do you always come and
sit on my back, why should I let you benefit from my size while you give me
nothing?”. The Kingbird thought for a moment and replied, “Why do I have to benefit
you? I’m not causing any harm to your back, am I?” The great Buffalo turned his
head back toward the plain ahead and huffed, “You’re lucky I’m in a terrific mood
today, for there is grass aplenty for me to graze upon.”
Weeks passed, with the Kingbird occasionally using the Buffalo
as a ride – nothing more was said on the topic until one evening, right as the
sun was setting. Unfortunately, the rain gods had not been shining down upon
the Oklahoma plains and there was little to eat. As the Kingbird flew out of
the blue sky and glided onto his back, the Buffalo asked, “Little bird, the sun
is setting and I’m walking west, could you flutter close to my eye so that the
sun doesn’t blind me?”. With that request, the Kingbird laughed, “Flutter in
front of your eye? You have to be kidding! Why would I move from my cozy spot
on your back, fluttering would be of no use to me!”.
The Buffalo was astounded. After all the time the Kingbird sat
on his back, feeding off the insects that he disturbed, wouldn’t help him with
a simple favor? Unacceptable.
The Buffalo knew he couldn’t do anything just yet, he would
wait for the Kingbird to fly off. After a few hours, when the Kingbird was done
resting and left for the night, the Buffalo headed to where the ground met the
sky to talk to the gods of the plains and skies. When he got there a few hours
later, the Buffalo God came trampling up to him from the heavens and thundered,
“Why have you come here, little buffalo?”. He spoke to the god of the unfair
treatment that he had received at the feet of the bird. After hearing his
predicament, the god concluded that the bird’s tail needed to be split in two,
so that it would have trouble flying and that it needed to be banished from
being near any buffalo on the plains.
After this day, the brown and white kingbird became known as
the scissor-tailed flycatcher, and they were never allowed to rest during a
long day on the Buffalo’s back.
This story was inspired by the Nigerian Folk Tales that I read this week. Many of them were in the style of explaining why the way things are with certain animals. Examples of this included why hippo's are always in the water, why worms don't have eyes, and why elephants and bush-cows always fight when they're near each other.
"Why the Hippopotamus Lives in the Water" Folk Stories From Southern Nigeria. Elphinstone Dayrell. 1910.
Picture above taken by Ken Slade on Flickr
Hi Andrew!
ReplyDeleteThis is such a clever origin story! I love that it's set in the rolling plains of Oklahoma. I also really liked that it's about scissor-tail flycatchers and buffalo. I was just as surprised as the buffalo when the bird refused to help keep the sun out if his eyes. But he got what he deserved for being a poor friend. You did a great executing this story clearly and creatively!
Hey Andrew,
ReplyDeleteYour story was super clever, and I very much enjoyed it. Kudos for writing an original, and not just using a story and changing up a few things. It really shows your creative mind. I think you did a fantastic job. Everything was clear, and the story flowed well. The only thing I noticed was that your sentences seemed pretty complex sometimes. There were a few sentences that I think you could have broken down into two different sentences to limit confusion. Other than that, this was a great read. Thank you!
Hey Andrew! I think your story for this week is very creative and interesting. I think it's awesome that you took a myth from another part of the world and related it back to Oklahoma. I really think the bird deserved to have his tail split in two. The buffalo was only being nice to him the entire time, and the bird never did anything to give back to the buffalo. I'm glad the buffalo stood up for himself by going to the buffalo gods. Great job this week!
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